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    soliloquy

    porcelina of the ocean sea
    epitome of all who beauty see
    take my hand, come with me
    and lie with me forever be

    my heart to you is what i give
    for you my love is why i live
    let you now in my arms be
    your lips on mine can touch it thee


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    ein lied fuer eunice

    porcelina of the ocean sea
    epitome of all who beauty see
    take my hand, come with me
    and lie with me my eunice schnee

    my heart to you is what i give
    for you my love is why i live
    let you now in my arms be
    your lips on mine can touch it thee

    do you think i have what it takes to be a goethe or a shakespeare

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    only after you're dead
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    Quote Originally Posted by payawaljohn
    do you think i have what it takes to be a goethe or a shakespeare
    Well you have a heart beat so probably no.

    What does:
    your lips on mine can touch it thee
    mean?

    What is schnee? (snow?).

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    Quote Originally Posted by r937
    only after you're dead
    Ah plop - slow fingers
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    Quote Originally Posted by payawaljohn
    do you think i have what it takes to be a goethe or a shakespeare
    Neither of these losers could write a line of SQL to save their lives.

    Eunice?

    Eunice is the name of your spinster aunt, not your lover.

    What's next? "Ode to Bertha"?
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    my eunice schnee

    beautiful girl, wherever you are
    i knew when i saw you you had opened the door
    i knew that id love again after a long long while
    i love again
    you said hello and I turned to go
    but something in your eyes left my heart beating so
    i just knew that i love again after a long long while
    i rove again

    it was destinys game
    when love finally came on
    i rushed in rine onry to find
    that you were gone

    wherever you are i fear that i might
    have lost you forever like a song in the night
    now that ive loved again after a long long while
    ive loved again

    beautiful girl ill search on for you
    until all of your loveliness in my arms come true
    youve made me love again after a long long while
    i love again
    and I'm glad that it's you

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    Please go away and leave me to my bitter loneliness...
    If it's not practically useful, then it's practically useless.

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    a restless night
    a full ash tray
    pictures of you
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    modern poetry does not rhyme most of the time and anyone can do it. I came up with this for you while making my coffee. i have words of caution for aspiring artists. When I was growing up, I had a several friends who thought they were special because they could play music, paint, draw, rap, or they had volumes of poetry and prose they had written. Their teachers all fed into their artistic delusions just as they fed into mine and I considered these kids and teachers no different than the coaches and local star athletes. In fact I lumped them all together under the heading of having “hoop dreams”. A lot of these kids who put all of their eggs into this basket are still living at home or got into some misadventure or another and those that gave up have had a hard time reorienting to the real world.

    Stay in school and do your homework. It is ok to have hobbies but they call them starving artists for a reason.
    “If one brings so much courage to this world the world has to kill them or break them, so of course it kills them. The world breaks every one and afterward many are strong at the broken places. But those that will not break it kills. It kills the very good and the very gentle and the very brave impartially. If you are none of these you can be sure it will kill you too but there will be no special hurry.” Earnest Hemingway, A Farewell To Arms.

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    Quote Originally Posted by blindman
    Please go away and leave me to my bitter loneliness...
    Outstanding! The best prose in this thread!
    Inspiration Through Fermentation

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